First Draft Feedback and Action Plan
I am pleased with how my first draft went, and have received some invaluable feedback.
As a result of this feedback, I need to focus more time into:
- change typography on website to clearly distinguish between Scarlett's 'handwritten' text and the websites own text (show more professional)
- consider colour scheme on website and make colours more eye-catching against each other
- make some clips brighter
- child shots use older filter
- transitions on music video
- more audience participation on website
- same font on video and website
- call back to video
- blend merch and second page
- ensure lip syncing is on time
- fix vimeo link
- embed link to glossier website
- intertextual references highlighted
I hope to make these adjustments over the half term and in time for submission on Friday 12th December.
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